Paragraph 1: Write a description of what you think Erlwanger's most important point is in this paper.
- Describe what the main point is.
- Present the evidence that Erlwanger uses to make this point.
Paragraph 2: Identify a part of his main point or argument that is valid for teaching mathematics today, and write a persuasive argument for why it is valid.
- Describe the part of the main point or the argument in Paragraph 1 that is still valid today.
- Explain why you think it is still valid.
Please proof read your entry before you post it. Remember, approximately four people will be reading your entry, so be courteous and keep the errors in your writing to a minimum.
Commenting: Visit three blogs that you have not yet commented on. If a blog already has four student comments, please choose a different blog to comment on. Read the whole entry, but focus your comment on the second paragraph. Your comment should identify one part of the second paragraph that you think meets the assignment well, and one part of the same paragraph that could be improved. Some possible issues you might want to consider commenting on include the fllowing:
- Is there a topic sentence for this paragraph that adequately captures the point of the paragraph?
- Are all of the sentences in the paragraph related to the topic sentence?
- Is the idea that the author is arguing for part of the main point or argument that was identified in the first paragraph?
- Is the idea the author is arguing for adequately described?
- Does the author provide a compelling argument for the validity of the idea for teaching mathematics today?
- Is there something in the paragraph that weakens or detracts from the argument?
- Is there a way that the argument could be strengthened?
- Does the author fail to consider important evidence or ideas that contradict the argument?
Due Dates: Entry due at start of class on Jan 25; comments due at start of class on Jan 27.